Good Idea?

Hey i saw this on another persons forum related to rm2k... the idea is to start a thread, an opening of a story, and get everyone to make the next part... so with all of our minds combined... we can make story's on our free time, and they would be amazing... we can discuss about them, and even use them in our games that we want to make considering everyone took part... i personally think this is an amazing idea, all you have to do to contribute is a couple minutes of thinking and writing, this even helps you out in a way by contributing, it raises your writing skills!
anyways, if you guys want to do this... say that you do or if you dont, then say dont... what im thinking of is to get another section of rm2k forum to be titled as rm2k story's ection...

i think it doesnt sound like a halfass idea and im for it. but who would make a game about it? and also, theres always gonna be a person who comes up with a stupid ass story. and i can also bet that somebody will have a story where penguins either die or rule the world.

lol, well we can give it a shot... i mean its good, but we got to be a bit serious about it for sure...

Who wants to start it off?

I'll share a few of my stories to give you some inspiration.
One of them has already been published at MMOFPS, but I'm sure most of you haven't visited that site anyway.

The dark, ominous shadows covered every single location of the planet. Surrounded by a gigantic fleet of Keryllians, no-one was left to be alive. The exploding photon missiles in the combination of laser beams tearing through metal and flesh was the worst thing to possibly hear. The attack had come by a surprise, and the few survivors knew their time was up.
Inside the Psaar 14 outpost, the alarms had stopped. The battle was lost only a few minutes after it had started. There was no hope left.
Admiral Fenrick looked at himself in the mirror with his sad, gray eyes. He knew that it would be the last time he would ever see his own face, his clothes, the room he was in, but most important of all, the friends he had fought for, the friend who had died for him. He knew that he was doomed, and he would be their savior, sent directly to hell for genocide. What kind of man could kill millions of people just to end their own tormenting? Fenrick knew what he had to do, since everyone would still die anyway.

Slowly, he put on his military hat, and grabbed his medals. He was properly dressed up, just like he had always been when he was granted some of the most remarkable rewards ever given. As the highest rank military of the Ganomios Elite Force, he knew he was the one who had to end the suffering. Death would be quick and not so painful, at least that was what he thought. A younger lieutenant entered the atmospheric room Fenrick was inside. He had never seen the Admiral contemplate so deeply before. He had all the rights to think about the future, since there would soon be none for him, or for anyone else.

The young lieutenant coughed once to catch Fenrick's attention. "Excuse me Sir, but the device has been armed. Everyone is waiting for you, Sir". Fenrick did not even look at the lieutenant, he just laughed once. It was not a laughter of joy, it was a cold laughter. "Do you have any idea what I am about to do? How could I possibly be forgiven for doing such a thing as this?"
The lieutenant took off his cap, revealing his short brown hair. "Sir, it has to be done. God will have mercy upon your soul."

Fenrick took a deep breath, and kept looking into the mirror. He had not looked away from it even once for over five minutes. For some reason, he knew he could not let his sad eyes away from it. He took another deep breath, closed his eyes for a moment, and walked away from the mirror and out of the room quickly, before he could even think about going back. He had spent so much time in the Psaar 14 complex, that he could most likely have walked through the entire facility blindfolded.
His thoughts were interrupted by sounds of even more bombs than ever before. He knew that they were getting closer, and being underground would not save them forever. What would have to be done could not wait for much longer, or it would be for no use. Most people were already dead, and this was their only chance of using their advanced technology for a good purpose.
The word "good" was stuck in Fenrick's mind for a while. What did it really mean? Killing millions of innocent people, how could it be an act of "good" will? They were all doomed for sure, and ending their pain quickly was the right thing to do... or was it really?

The skinny lieutenant patted Fenrick on his shoulder, causing him to forget what he was thinking about completely. "Sir, we'd better get going. I know it can't be easy, it isn't for any of us, but this has to be done". Fenrick bowed down a little, looking into the eyes of the six feet shorter lieutenant's dark-blue eyes. "If anyone has the right to be afraid, it would have to be you. You have not even lived one third of your life yet, and you know you are going to die? That is a horrible thing, and a psychologist would probably tell you that subduing you feelings was not the right thing to do, but right now, you should. Die with your pride, knowing that you died for a purpose of serving humanity, instead of dying in fear."

Fenrick turned his back on the lieutenant and walked away from him quickly. He wished that there would have been another way out, but battling an enemy like this with regular warfare would be an impossibility. The amount of them was overwhelming, and the attackers had already won their battle. What they did not know was that the Psaar outpost, possibly the last outpost of the planet, had a big surprise for them.

The central chamber, covered entirely in armored lithium glass, would be the final destination of the honored Admiral. The pressure doors opened slowly, and the sound of compressed air had to give in to Fenrick's heavy footsteps, as he entered the room. Scientists were spread out across the room, each one of them writing something on their computers. Two of Fenrick's oldest friends, General Tommington and Dr. Eugrean were the only ones in the room, except for the admiral himself, wearing something different than classical white scientist coats. The centre of the room had the device itself in it; a sphere-shaped metallic object supported by four metal bars attached to it on their one end, and the floor on their opposite end. Fenrick approached a computer attached to the sphere with hundreds of wires connected to it, and knew that all he had to do was to push a button. He was simply the one who had to do it due to his supreme military rank. Being in charge had its benefits, but what he had to do right now was so terrible that he could as well have forgotten about all of the good things he had accomplished in his military squadron, in his career, and in his entire life. Who would have the right to do such a thing, as what he was about to do?

He knew that he didn't have to think much about it, people had died before. Dr. Eugrean approached Fenrick slowly, and took a deep breath, as if he was about to sing two psalms from the bible without actually fainting due to an oxygen loss. "We all know this is hard, but I would consider this to be a honor. Myself, I could never kill anyone, but I am sure you will be rewarded for this more than anyone else in the afterlife. Either way, the singularity mechanics will be fully functional in about one minute from now, so why don't we all... pray?"
"If there was a God, we would not have had to do this", General Tommington said surprisingly. "There is nothing worse than actually knowing when you are doomed. I used to have nightmares as a kid about meeting a witch, telling you which year, day, even hour you were destined to die on. This is my worst nightmare that has unfortunately come true".

Fenrick did not answer the question, he simply looked around him, seeing all the shocked and depressed people. The only good thing about all of this was that they might be the only survivors knowing about the atrocity they were about to commit. Killing was a profession for the military, but killing your own men was something completely different. Serving humanity by intentionally killing your own loyal men, who are willing to do anything for you, was not a pleasant thought.
A synthetic sound of a bell rung for a moment, and the time had come. Fenrick walked over to the computer, and saw the blinking switch. He took the time to listen around him for a moment. The bombs had gotten really close, and had begun to cover the sounds of the sniffing, desperate cries for help and prayers he had not really noticed as much before. Delaying his final act would only make things worse.

He put his hand on the switch, closing his eyes. "Kill the dragon while you can", he whispered for himself. Fenrick pulled the switch, and he thought no more.

The three remaining guards took cover behind two gray stone pillars in the library. "Take her out, she can't get away!" screamed one of the guards. A young asian lady named Jin, dressed in all black quickly leaped into a safer position behind two bookshelves, and took her light-weight backpack off. What had been supposted to have been a quick "in and out" mission had turned out to be much more dangerous than she could possibly have imagined. Stealing the Arconis Disc from the Blaron headquarters was supposed to have been an easy task, and the girl's own headquarters, also known as The Needle, had informed her that there would be no guards present. The Needle were usually never wrong due to their massive intelligence operations, and it looked like she might have been set up, either to test her skills or because they needed to get rid of her in a quick and easy way. The only thing she did know for sure was that she would fight until she would breathe no more.

Jin heard that one of the guards sent a message on his radio. "Zulu 5 here, we have found the girl. Requesting backup". She knew that staying in the library for much longer would make her an easy prey, so she had to get out of there quickly. Being a professional killer was one thing, but being specialized in martial arts trapped in a fairly open library with few hiding places was not the best thing she knew. The 18 stone pillars, 9 on each long side of the rectangular shaped room, seemed to be a good place to take cover behind. The guards all stood in the right side of the room, making the left side the most obvious escape route. The equipment in her black backpack consisted of an electromagnetic lockpick, a twistable fibre optics' camera tube used for seeing around corners, and a pair of dark shades with a built-in LNC display which could be used as either the screen for the fibre camera, a scanner detecting infrared light and radiation sources, and finally, as a mobile command centre for contacting her headquarters.

Jin picked up the sunglasses and put them on gently, and she looked more hideous and shady than ever before. Both her tight pants and shirt were made out of black silk taken from genetically engineered butterflies, making the cloth durability much better than regular silk. Her black plastic gloves were equipped with ambronic microfibres, making it easier to clutch things, plus that her hands would "melt together" with the rest of her contours, which would give her the ability to hide in the shadows a bit easier. Except for the camouflage feature, there was really no reason to be afraid of forgetting the gloves since her fingerprints were burnt off by electric pulses after she had joined The Needle. Her dark gray sneakers were very comfortable, and even though she had already practiced for a long time to run silently, these made the sneaking fairly much easier due to the pressure cushions. Except for her long, dark hair and malevolent, sad eyes, the only way to easily spot her was to look at her face along with the red lipstick. Being a professional killer and a Needle Special Agent required her to do her job and be gone before anyone had noticed. However, the few people who had the misfortune to actually see her face usually died a very unpleasant death shortly after. The guards had already seen her, and the question was if she would be able to deal with them or not.

With her right hand, Jin picked up her fibre optics' tube and bent the side with the lens over the bookshelf, and looked around in the room through her sunglasses. The three guards were still standing in their original positions, waiting for her to do a move, so they could hopefully kill her with their borehole weapons before she could even realize that they were waiting for her. They were wrong this time. Jin put the fibre optics' tube back into her backback, and leaped towards the left side of the room, landing on her hands and doing a somersault towards the closest pillar. "There she is", one of the guards screamed and took aim at her. He pulled the trigger, and a yellow orb projectile was launched with a humming sound. The orb travelled across the room in one tenth of a second, and missed its target by a few yards. The projectile slowly carved a deep hole into the brown brickwall, and dark dust started coming out of the hole. The codename for the weapon was "Borehole" after all, for a good reason.

The other two guards took aim at Jin at the same time as she managed to hide behind the closest pillar. Two shots shots were fired, both hitting the wall not far from where the first guard shot. She remembered some of the horrible things she had seen in the Gyanka complex on one of her missions, where scientists were experimenting on captives with their borehole class weapons. Seeing their limbs, vital organs and even heads turn into nothing but a dark, smoking tube-like hole smelling like rotten chicken that had been jammed into a toaster for 10 minutes of time, was not the most pleasant thing she could think of. Not only that, she knew that she would better not think about such things at this moment, considering that she knew that the pillar wouldn't be a safe place for much longer.

Another projectile was fired, hitting the pillar itself, which carved a deep hole into it just a few feet above her head. Luckily, it did not collapse, but it was not far from it. Finding a safe spot in a room with three trigger-happy guards using highly illegal weapons was not the easiest thing to do. She was behind the first pillar, and in order to get across the room, she would have to get past the remaining 8 ones to reach the cold steel-door leading to the stairs and elevator lobby. Jin heard the sound of two more projectiles being fired, and she realized that at least one of them had hit the pillar, causing it to start flipping in her direction. Her reflexes instantly made her start running towards the next pillar, and almost immediately after, she heard the sound of the pillar she had been hiding behind crashing over the position she was taking cover in a second ago. She spotted two of the guards as she ran across the room, one of them pulling his trigger, sending another yellow sphere towards her. Luckily, it missed her back by only a few inches, and more adrenaline started to get pumped into her body as she kept running from a certain death. Jin was close to the second pillar and decided to do a leap to take cover behind it, but at the same time, the other guard she saw fired his gun. He hit on the other side of the pillar, about five feet ahead of her, and she noticed that this projectile hole started to cover the area around it with dust.

One of the guards shook his head. "You and I will take out the pillars ahead of the girl while Johnson does his work. He knows what he's doing, but we need to destroy the pillars so she can't take cover any longer". Jin listened to his words, and reached for her backpack. She grabbed her lockpick, and at the same time, two shots were fired, both hitting the pillar in front of her, causing it to tremble in a massive cloud of dusty smoke. She sidestepped to the right quickly, to the place where she came from only a few seconds ago. The guards weren't prepared for her to show up on the left side of the pillar from their direction, and before they could even get the chance to aim at her, she threw the lockpick into their direction. "Grenade, take cover!" screamed one of the guards with his robotic male voice, at the same time as he dived away from his sniper position along with the other guard. Jin started running across the room, as she had caught their attention for a moment. After running past 4 additional pillars, the third guard, Johnson, showed up behind her back and took aim for a few seconds. He fired his gun, and the projectile hit the floor directly below her feet. She was shocked, and took cover behind the sixth pillar. "Johnson, where the hell did you teach you how to aim?" yelled one of the guards, who had just realized that the object thrown at him wasn't a grenade after all. Jin leaned her back towards the cold stone pillar, as she caught her breath while listening to the annoyed guards.
"Where are you hiding you little bitch? I hope you enjoy pain"! All of the guards advanced quickly, and Jin heard that at least one of them was on her side of the room. She waited patiently, and when she heard the guard's footsteps were close enough, she leaped out, catching the guard by surprise. Before he could even take aim at her, she grabbed his gun with her left hand and jabbed his right eye with her other hand, using a piercing blow with her fingertips. She drenched her fingers with blood from his punctured eye.
"Oh my god, no, aieeeh... I don't...", before the guard could even finish the sentence, she grabbed his chin with her left hand, pulled it left and then right directly with a lot of force, causing his neck to break.

She quickly started running away, and at the same time as the corpse fell to its knees, one of the guards opened his mouth from the sight. "Johnson!" screamed the guard hysterically, and fired his gun without getting a good aim. The projectile hit the corpse at about the same time as its knees hit the ground. The projectile drilled a hole through the shoulders of Johnson, continuing through his body and into the wall. Jin looked around quickly, and she saw his head fall into the knee of the corpse, at the same time as the corpse's bleeding back was falling backwards. The other guard had advanced quite more than guard horrified by the sight of his own friend killed by the girl in black.
Jin leaped behind another bookshelf onto a dark carpet in order to attempt to get the guards off her back. She realized that one of the guards were standing only a few feet away from her, in the direction she was facing. He was coming closer, so she thought keeping her head down would keep her safe, since the room wasn't as well-lit as it could have been. With her black hair covering all of her body by lying on her belly, she knew that she was hard to see from above, especially since she was lying on a dark carpet, which broke up her contours. She looked up carefully, and she could see the light-gray military boots of the soldier approach her slowly. He was going to walk by too far away from her, and according to how his feet turned around, he seemed to be looking around carefully. In a situation like this, attacking a careful person with a heavy gun who would walk you by, by the distance of approximately 18 feet was not an easy target. Getting up, and moving that far would take around 4 seconds, enough time for him to kill her easily. The guard walked even closer, but she decided that she would lie still and hope she would be lucky. She tried to breathe silently, even though the adrenaline in her body was struggling with her attempts to calm down. She put her face down, trying to make her dark hair cover all of her untanned baby skin in her face.

The guard moved further a little bit, but she heard him stop just in front of her. He hadn't stopped for this long before, and she started to sweat. She was frightened. Playing with other human lives was all right with her, since she didn't actually beleive in any kinds of sacred human unions. She was on her own, and as long as she could take advantage of other people to fulfil her own desires, it was perfectly fine with doing anything at all, malicious or not. Except for the respect she had for certain people, she had no sympathy for any living beings at all. Despite her self-concerned thinking, she knew that the remaining two guards would feel releived for sure if they killed her. Being a professional killer in certain situations had its downsides though. In The Needle, failure was never an option. "Do your task, or die in the hands of your opponent. Fail with your tasks, and return to us to die a thousand deaths in our hands" was the mutual agreement of The Needle, and the ones who had chickened out died in a very unpleasant way once they had returned, no matter what their reasons were.
Even if they had been given an impossible mission that no single agent would have managed to complete, The Needle council had sent them to it for a reason, the reason that they were no longer neccesary.

Jin heard the guard pick up his radio for a moment. "I cannot find the girl. We need that backup at once to search the place carefully". She was releived, even though she knew she would be in a lot of trouble once the backup would show up. The guard scratched his head as Jin listened carefully to his words. "Umm... yeah, hold on, I think I have it in one of my pockets".
Now was the time to strike. Surprise was the best attack, as her mentors had taught her ever since she was only a kid. Being 22, a martial artists, professional killer and a member of one of the galaxy cluster's most hideous assassin organizations was not the most common profession in the space age, but it had its uses for sure.
She got up on her feet quickly, took four steps forward and leaped towards the guard. Before he could even realize that she was this close, she had already grabbed his legs and pulled them towards her, throtteling his helpless body towards the cold stone floor. Jin got up on her feet at the same time as the guard landed on the floor on his nose. She looked around quickly, seeing no third guard anywhere. The guard screamed in agony, and she realized that he must have fallen really bad. "I'm sorry about your nose", she said, and delivered a quick kick on the back of his neck, ending his pain instantly.

"Hey, where did you go?", someone screamed. Jin never actually heard the third guard say anything until now, so hopefully, the voice wouldn't be a part of anyone from the reinforcement. She took this former guard's heavy weapon and radio transmitter, and lugged them both to the carpet she had lied down on earlier. The Borehole weapon was slightly heavier than she had thought at first, but hopefully, she would get a good position from there to fire at anyone approaching the fresh corpse. She turned the radio transmitter off, so everything would be completely silent around her. While she waited, she heard no footsteps for over a minute. It seemed like she could stay there forever, safe and sound, but she knew that something was very wrong. She picked up the fibre optics' camera from her backpack and started looking in the room with it once more. Surprisingly, she couldn't find anyone, all she could see was the 16 remaining stone pillars supporting the room, lots of bookshelves covered with even more books, two chinese style lightsources in the ceiling and several computer screens. A couple of windows would have added to the overall environmental settings, but the shady light settings were ideal for hiding in.
The sound of a metal door echoed throughout the room, and Jin turned her fibre optics' camera around quickly. The door she was heading for from the beginning had opened, and guards started rushing out of it. After she had counted to 12 guards and probably even more of them approaching, she knew she was in big trouble this time. The Needle had lied to her, their intelligence operations would never miss 15 or more heavily armed guards like this, unless something had seriously went wrong on this monday in June.

The deep voice she had heard only moments ago, asking where someone had gone, was heard again. "I think she is hiding behind one of bookcases. Johnson and Peterson are already dead, their necks got cracked". Another male voice interrupted him. "All right Rayne, we will take care of it. You'll cover the right flanks". Rayne coughed twice to catch some attention. "Sir, I am injured, the girl shot me. I'm going to visit the sickbay at once". "Roger that, don't worry about it".
Jin contemplated about Rayne's conversation with the man he referred to as "Sir". "He never approached the corpse, and if he did, I would have heard his footsteps. How could he have known that his neck was broken from a really long distance?" she thought for herself. "Secondly, I never shot him, I never even used any weapons at all so far. What was he talking about?" Her thoughts got interrupted by the man Rayne had been talking to. "Move out, don't let the girl get away. She is armed and dangerous, shoot at sight."
"This is certainly not a good hiding place", Jin thought for herself.

After seeing several guards approach slowly through her sunglasses, she decided that she would have to get out of the room somehow, and her escape would have to be done quickly too. Even if she was a good assassin, the soldiers were far too many to deal with, even though she had a gun. She was not especially muscular, just very well fit, making her unable to move quickly with a heavy gun such as the Borehole Launcher. "I guess white guys will have no mercy on Asian assassins", she thought for herself. The word Asian reminded her of something, not her ethnicity, but something she had thought of only moments ago. "Darkness, cover, confusion...", the thoughts mixed up with excessive adrenaline and stress didn't give her a good result at this moment. "The Chinese lightsources", she thought. Jin picked up the heavy gun slowly and aimed at one of the two lights in the ceiling. She pulled the trigger, sending a borehole projectile through the lamp, taking it out completely. "There she is!" one of the guards screamed. Jin took aim at the second lightsource and fired. The projectile only touched the lightsource, causing it to start flickering slowly, with a buzzing electronic sound.
She heard a lot of heavy footsteps quickly approach her hideout, and she aimed at the light again. As the footsteps got even closer, she pulled the trigger and hit the light perfectly well this time. As the entire room went dark, she grabbed the radio transmitter and started running away as she heard the confused guards scream. "Where am I? Did anyone bring some nightvision googles?"
Three of the guards turned on a flashlight each, searching the room carefully with them. "No nightvision today boys, we'll have to do this the classic way".
Jin had already moved across the room to the left side of it, running silently through the complete darkness towards the opened metal door. The three flashlights were all searching in the wrong side of the room, and she managed to reach the gable wall, only around 20 feet away from the metal door. She had memorized the room, and looking at the source of the flashlights, she could easily find out where some of the guards were. A weak lightsource with a bluish saturation from the room behind the metal door guided her path towards the elevator lobby as well, but it was not bright enough to let her know if there would be any guards standing directly next to the metal door. She knew that she would have to take a chance though, since it would most likely be her only way out. "I can't find her!" one of the guards screamed at the same time as she waited next to the metal door for a moment. She grabbed the thin brickwall in the door interance with her gloves and leaped forward quickly, sending her body in a U-shaped rotation path into the next room. Luckily, no guards were standing inside of that room, but using the elevator would most likely attract a few of them. The staircase seemed to be the only resonable option this time.

The stairs led her only one floor up, into a long corridor with 10 steel doors and binary locks next to every single one of them. Two guards were standing next to the second door on the right side, making that door look fairly more interesting than the other ones. Jin snuck into the corridor from the stairs, and started running towards the guards. The guards were caught by surprise, and she threw herself into the air, doing a sidekick hitting one of the guards on his shoulder, painfully dislocating it. The other guard started running in the other direction, and Jin didn't finish off the injured guard, but started running towards the fleeing guard instead. She caught up with him quickly due to his heavy weapons he was apparently too afraid to use. "Please, girl, I don't want any trouble, I just...", before he could even finish the sentence, she hit his temple section of his head with a forceful blow, causing his brain to be depressurized and start bleeding, an effect which would most likely cause the human body to faint due to an outgoing oxygen blow from the brain, killing a normal human being within 10 minutes. He fell to the floor as if he had been hit by a brick in his head. She grabbed the guard's heavy gun, moving back towards the injured guard next to the binary lock. "You... you're inhuman. Wh... why are you doing this to us?". Jin smirked at the guard and chuckled for a few seconds while looking him into his eyes. "It's just business, and revelling in people's suffering is a part of my job". The guard coughed and whined from the excruciating pain from his greatly dislocated shoulder for a moment. "I know you're after the Arconis Disc in the room, but I'm..." Jin interrupted the injured guard. "Give me the code, I'm not going to hurt you if you do."
The guard shook his head, realizing that the pain from his shoulder got worse by doing so. "I... I can't... I don't know the code. Can't you just get in with the gun?"
"Unfortuenately, this gun doesn't go through Tibonum material, even though it is using Borehole projectiles. I really need the code." Jin grabbed his dislocated shoulder and started playing with it by pulling it around for a moment. The guard's pupils were expanding, his mouth opened up from the pain, and his body started shaking in horror. "Aiiieeeehhh, please stop, I'm going to die, stop it, it hurts..!" Jin laughed at the guard as she caused him more pain. "I'm sure you know the code, just give it to me, and I won't hurt you any longer, I promise". The guard kept shaking from his horrible pain. "3, 4, 9, 1, 7, 5, 1, please don't hurt me any more". Jin let go of his dislocated shoulder and listened to him cough up some blood. She entered the code in the binary lock, and the door opened silently on its own. "Thank you, just stay where you are while I get the disc."

Jin dragged the heavy gun into the claustrophobic room with a white light setting, and started looking through the only thing in the room, the drawers in a workbench. Inside, there were a lot of classified documents, but in the bottom drawer, the blue holodesk shaped like a square cd-rom disc was located. She put it in her backpack and moved out of the room with the Borehole Launcher in her hands. The guard had been whining and trying to watch her all the time. She aimed the gun at the guard's chest, grabbing the trigger. The guard opened his eyes widely. "But... but, you said you wouldn't hurt me!" he said hysterically. Jin shook her head. "That's right, this isn't even going to hurt. Death will be instant." The guard shook his head slowly. "But..." Before he could say anything further, Jin pulled the trigger, sending the yellow projectile into his chest. "Nooooo, oh nooooo, oh my god, please, noooo..!". Jin looked at the corpse left after the Borehole Launcher had done its work. "I guess I was wrong about the pain, will you please forgive me?" She laughed at the man's pain, and revelled in the thought about the sorrow his possible wife and children would experience in the rest of their lives.

One of the metallic doors in the other side of the corridor opened, and Jin aimed the weapon at it. No-one came out through it, but instead, she heard Rayne's voice from the room behind it. "Come on in, I need to talk to you. This is the only way out as the guards are blocking the bottom floor, and I beleive I have your electromagnetic lockpick. I'm not going to hurt you, and no, that doesn't mean I'm going to kill you without any pain either". She got the feeling of being watched all the time. If there had been any surveillance cameras around her, she would have noticed long ago, but how could Rayne seem to know so much about what she had done? She had to find out what was going on.
She took a peak inside the room, which was completely unlit. She went inside, unable to see anyone in there. "Hello?" she said gently. "Hello there, Jin" Rayne said from above her head. She looked up quickly, seeing him hanging in the ceiling attached to it with a few cords. Before she got the chance to say anything, he smacked her in her forehead using a metal bar. The sight of the soldier who had been tracking her every move all along was fading out slowly. She started to feel dizzy, and suddently, everything went completely dark.