Dumb ass Poem.

The misery, inside of me has grown
The fatality of the hyperbole has come from a gun
My life is the only thing that matters under the sun
But it's confusing living this life without my number one.

Well, you're right. It was dumb. But you're going to have to try harder to top slaynish's shit. Go for anal sex with men. Please write fiction, I don't want to know.

Uh well the problem with that is I posted an 'erotic story' and since it's related to PORNOGRAPHY it's against the rules.

Little Ms. Muffet
Sat on her Tuffet
eating her Curds and ..way
Along came a Spidey
Sat down beside-y
And said "Whats in the bowl bitch!?"

-Andrew Dice Clay

I'm not going to deny that sucks total ass, but theres something about flacid 12 year old dick that just makes me want to stomach pump myself.

It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

Shinto, its raz's forum, let him take care of it. I hear neo chronos calling

Only a matter of time before he's banned.. (again)

Read the rules. Already broke one.

Stating the obvious?

He flamed himself with his title, what did he expect?

No self confidence begets no respect.

It doesn't give you permission to flame me outside the FF. I said it's a dumbass poem, Not I'm a dumbass.

And I never said you were a dumbass. Point being what?

I'm a dumbass.

Right there you did.

The poem is....well, no negative comments. Bah.

What do you Mean by 'number one'. A girlfriend or something?

What do you Mean by 'number one'. A girlfriend or something?

Running with that, I don't think hyperbole is the word you're looking for.

"The fatality of the exaggeration has come from a gun"

If that's what you're going for, it must be so deep that I can't see it.

.... Point being you are NOT Allowed to flame outside the Flame Forum.

Yes, but aren't you flaming? I must have missed when "dumb ass" became an euphamism for "cool."

He flamed himself with his title, what did he expect?

....

Point being you are NOT Allowed to flame outside the Flame Forum.

The ban of Grav is what I yearn
If only the world would turn
The slaying of Slim would be so great
If only the world would turn
Slaynish slaughtered, cow style
If only the world would turn
I can't be a part of this proximity
Why won't the world, turn for me?

Well, since you seem to want me dead so much why not come find me? I'll be waiting for you, e-thug.

The ban of Grav is what I yearn If only the world would turn The slaying of Slim would be so great If only the world would turn Slaynish slaughtered, cow style If only the world would turn I can't be a part of this proximity Why won't the world, turn for me?

"I can't be a part of this closeness"

That just doesn't work. The world DOES turn, so your B lines aren't really making sense either. the last line should really be "If only the world would turn.. for me.."

Slim if you have nothing constructive to say, please do not spam my thread.

Knock it off with the flames, guys. Seriously, I don't understand what's so fucking hard about that.

Knock it off with the flames, guys. Seriously, I don't understand what's so fucking hard about that.

I knew it was only a matter of time b4 Mr. Nazi would come in and ruin the thread.