Zelaron Gaming Forum  
Stats Arcade Portal Forum FAQ Community Calendar Today's Posts Search
Go Back   Zelaron Gaming Forum > The Zelaron Nexus > Science and Art

 
 
Thread Tools Display Modes

 
Post antique orgel
Reply
Posted 2003-11-21, 08:10 PM
Some story that I wrote like uh.. a month ago, I think.-

Once upon a time - if time were to exist in such a place at all - lived a young girl in a peculiar place, a land full of oddities and macabre fate, carousels and the scenery of dulled sepia photographs, broken wires and story books. The nameless young girl, with her dark hair and light eyes and her babydoll attire, danced and twirled for no one, like the porcelain doll in an antique music box.

This girl had a fascination with her out-of-place plush doll; a nearly insane attachment to the ragged and torn toy. It was in the shape of a beautiful animal, yet no one could ever decide quite what it was. Some said it was a fox, or a cat, and some simply spat that the thing was an atrocious misfortune that should be none of the like, and trashed immediately . . . as should she. Yet the little porcelain girl, even when shattered, held dearly onto the deity that in itself was only held together by thread and voodoo pins. After all it had never done her wrong, never once would a long needle slip lose to let blood.

Until she began to take her love for granted. Losing interest in her childish fixations and whoring it out freely to the first nice thing that caught her eye, was when it all began to come undone and fall apart. The pins severed her flesh and, highly offended, she had had enough, she was through. Screaming, raged, crying she threw all of the things that she had held so dear into the banishment known as a packing box and pushed it away...

And nonexistent time passed for the girl. She had changed - perhaps no longer a small figurine, but now a butterfly, as butterflies do change in time, once they pry from their silken chrysalises. Though now she wasn't quite sure what she was, or had been, and oh, how many questions there were. People had learned to accept this confused little girl, yet ... she longed for it no more. Cared not much for the embraces of so many blinded souls, as there was still something missing from her, and she was scared and left out in the open like wounded prey.

She hid away, from herself and everyone else, and began to dig through her memories. Box by box, cutting away the clear tape, pulling things out putting them back in, repeating, repeating, repeating. Finally, she found what she had been searching for, and for a moment, a weak smile played across her face. Even danced, like the innocence she had once been...

Everything peeled away, as if it never mattered. This place was dark, but warm as to show that it was not void, and the sound of a music box spiraled about it. There was, indeed, a music box; the lid propped by it's hinges and such strange contents as old pins, candies, and gauze bandages. It was the peace offering and her last hope of sanity, that she placed in front of an empty closet. She sat waiting, deciding if this was the right thing, and then, with a pensive sigh she let go of the key. The music once again filled the air. The dancer began to spin. Her voice shook,

"I miss you... Please, come out to play."

Staring forward into nothing, the girl began to give up, and she silently began to curse herself as she knew things would not work so easily, so ... childishly. Then it happened. A slight noise, and a hand began to slide out of the closet - pink tipped fingers fading to black; then further it came, the black fading and spotted to orange. It crawled out on it's knees, black decay dripping out from the sewing that decorated it's ivory underbelly. The creature was stuck full of strange pins; it was a demon of a rotting candy voodoo doll, all stitched and pinned together.

She was not afraid, not anymore.

The girl and her creature smiled and embraced each other as everything continued melting away around them. They faded into the same existance as it became her shell. And they stayed there, forever (if there was such a thing, as the word means less than time...)

Hiding away and intertwined in that dark place.
Old
Profile PM WWW Search
Decayed Voodoo is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-betweenDecayed Voodoo is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-between
 
 
Decayed Voodoo
 



 
Reply
Posted 2003-11-23, 05:05 PM in reply to Decayed Voodoo's post "antique orgel"
umm.....
Old
Profile PM WWW Search
vec is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-betweenvec is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-between
 
 
vec
 



 
Reply
Posted 2003-11-23, 05:08 PM in reply to Decayed Voodoo's post "antique orgel"
Vec dont spam. Deayed Voodoo, thats a shit load better then anything i can write. Truth be told i didnt read it all, i catn sit still long enough to do so, but what i did read sounded good.
Old
Profile PM WWW Search
Sovereign enjoys the static noises of ten television sets simultaneously tuned to 412.84 MHzSovereign enjoys the static noises of ten television sets simultaneously tuned to 412.84 MHz
 
 
Sovereign
 



 
Reply
Posted 2003-11-26, 01:22 AM in reply to Decayed Voodoo's post "antique orgel"
Certainly an interesting story. Tell me this though, what precisely is the "creature" supposed to represent?
Old
Profile PM WWW Search
Raziel is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-betweenRaziel is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-between
 
 
Raziel
 



 
Reply
Posted 2003-12-02, 07:34 AM in reply to Decayed Voodoo's post "antique orgel"
Raziel said:
Certainly an interesting story. Tell me this though, what precisely is the "creature" supposed to represent?
This is how the creature looks like (it was also a story-gift thing to my friend who drew the picture below)


art (c) Kur.
Old
Profile PM WWW Search
Decayed Voodoo is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-betweenDecayed Voodoo is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-between
 
 
Decayed Voodoo
 



 
Reply
Posted 2003-12-02, 08:47 AM in reply to Decayed Voodoo's post "antique orgel"
*edit-aparant worthless post*
Old
Profile PM WWW Search
Valmar is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-betweenValmar is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-between
 
 
Valmar
 



 
Reply
Posted 2003-12-03, 06:56 AM in reply to Decayed Voodoo's post "antique orgel"
Decayed Voodoo said:
This is how the creature looks like (it was also a story-gift thing to my friend who drew the picture below)
Yes, but does the creature signify something? Does it have greater purpose through subtext, or should the reader just take it's presence at face-value?
Old
Profile PM WWW Search
Raziel is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-betweenRaziel is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-between
 
 
Raziel
 
 

Bookmarks

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 

Posting Rules [Forum Rules]
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump


All times are GMT -6. The time now is 12:13 PM.
'Synthesis 2' vBulletin 3.x styles and 'x79' derivative
by WetWired the Unbound and Chruser
Copyright ©2002-2008 zelaron.com
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
This site is best seen with your eyes open.