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Posted 2003-11-19, 04:04 PM
Betrayed


The ones I loved so many years ago,
A dagger through my heart, seemed not to care.
The twisted words and truth told from the crow,
Revealing cries that stripped my essence bare.
Cold eyes full of hatred that seem to stare
At not the person that’s always been near.
Completely shattered the one thing I cared,
Deep trust that was once something I held dear.
I only wish that everything would clear
So this childish grudge would finally end.
I could carry on my life without fear
With all of our differences set to mend.
But know even if this would never cease
Love remains that will refuse to release.


© Jessica W.
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Posted 2003-11-19, 05:19 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.
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Posted 2003-11-19, 05:29 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
Right. Okay. Whatever.
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Posted 2003-11-19, 06:03 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
I read that somewhere else before...
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Posted 2003-11-19, 06:25 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
I'm certain that you haven't. It's written in Shakespearian Sonnet form, however.
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Posted 2003-11-26, 01:24 AM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
Usually, as long as you have the copyright symbol on it, the copyright status will hold up in court.
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Posted 2003-11-26, 02:16 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
people shouldn't steal other people's ideas anyway.
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Posted 2003-11-26, 08:06 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
Who's stealing?
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Posted 2003-12-04, 01:10 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
Jessifer said:
Who's stealing?
I'm not saying you stole someone's idea.I am saying that if people didn't steal other people's ideas then copyrights wouldn't be needed.
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Posted 2003-12-04, 01:26 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
Yeah, well. Go live in Mars or something.
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Posted 2003-12-04, 03:54 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
I believe the correct way to say that would be, go live ON mars.
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Posted 2003-12-04, 05:58 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
Blast. You beat me to it.
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Posted 2003-12-04, 07:47 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
I beat you to everything except wrighting quality poems or songs :\
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Posted 2003-12-05, 11:19 AM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.
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Posted 2003-12-05, 11:23 AM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
~Krayzie-Bone~ said:
I beat you to everything except wrighting quality poems or songs :\
Should I be hurt or honored?
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Posted 2003-12-05, 12:02 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
Your choice, and shinto.. i could really care less about corrections, i just dislike eddie for some reason.
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Posted 2003-12-05, 08:17 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
I chose to be apathetic.
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Posted 2003-12-06, 11:42 AM in reply to Jessifer's post "Betrayed"
I don't want to live on Mars.
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