Every time we talk

Profile · Posted 2003-12-09, 12:35 PM

Every time we talk

You don't understand
Exactly what you do to me.
Every time we talk
My heart wants to scream.
Instead I put a smile on my face.
I'm convincing, I know I am.
You think I'm happy
And getting along without you.
But every time we talk
It's a harsh reminder
That without you beside me
I'm just not complete.
When you left
You took part of me with you.
And truthfully I don't know
Whether I want it back or not.
I'm not sure what you took
When you left me behind you.
I don't know what I'm missing.
Every time we talk
My emotions are jumbled.
I'm happy to be around you,
But still I want to be with you.
How can I love
After you left me so easily?
Tell me, how do you love
After you left me so quickly?
Maybe the next time we talk
I'll ask you this.
I'll ask you how to move on
The next time we talk.
But I'm reminded that I just can't
Every time we talk.

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-09, 01:09 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

how do you think up all this stuff?

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-09, 01:14 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

When I write poetry, I do it to sort through different thoughts and feelings that I'm feeling right at that moment, and put them down onto the paper. Often my poetry will need editing after its done, or minor tweaking.

They're usually based on what's going on in my life.

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-11, 08:42 AM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

Jessifer said:

When I write poetry, I do it to sort through different thoughts and feelings that I'm feeling right at that moment, and put them down onto the paper. Often my poetry will need editing after its done, or minor tweaking.

They're usually based on what's going on in my life.

what happened to make you write this poem though?

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-11, 07:51 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

And here I thought this poem spoke for itself.

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-12, 08:49 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

nice jessifer......I'd post my poems but they are in spanish so i dont think anyone could understand them....

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-14, 08:45 AM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

That was good jessifer...lol...i'd post my stuff...lol...but its not that good...

neway...that is pretty good

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-15, 04:26 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-15, 04:30 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

It's my life's goal to depress everyone around me in some way. Naw, it's not.

Thanks, though.

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-15, 04:42 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-15, 04:49 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

Sure. Go ahead. I don't mind as long as the credit is given to me. And maybe a link to my LJ.

Which is the same URL as the webpage link.

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-15, 04:58 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-15, 05:12 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

Where's your journal, anyway? Out of curiousity.

Jessifer · Posted 2003-12-17, 05:32 PM in reply to Jessifer's post "Every time we talk"

hey kinda new to literature.. but nice poem.. I liked the mood it brought out.. and ohh yea
the obvious messege

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