My Objection to Religion

You better be the first black president, mjordan2nd. >=|

And you should publish it. Might wanna reword it just a tad and follow what your dad said though.

Might wanna reword it just a tad

What/How would you suggest?

maybe he was just bored when he posted?

maybe he was just bored when he posted?

I'm not sure what that means or who it was directed towards.

Maybe simplify the language a little bit. Try to use more positive words instead of negative words. That's up to you, though. I thought it was fine the way it is, but I just thought I'd just offer up that since a friend of mine told me to suggest it.

Maybe simplify the language a little bit. Try to use more positive words instead of negative words. That's up to you, though. I thought it was fine the way it is, but I just thought I'd just offer up that since a friend of mine told me to suggest it.

Hmm...

Is the language difficult to follow? If so, could you or your friend suggest where I might simplify it?

I'll ask him when he's back from his classes.

Do you never see your dad or something? That sounds like a very weird reply to get from your dad.

Do you never see your dad or something? That sounds like a very weird reply to get from your dad.

I see him every other week or so. Why do you say that?

It seems distant, one of those "I'll buy his love because I never see him" relationships that come about from divorces and parents with careers.