Could someone help me?

Okay, I just started making a game in RPG maker xp, but I'm kind of confused. In the begining, I would like to have text that reads,

<> Message: " Welcome to the Bermuda worlds, I see your a Vampire."
<> Message: " Your name is Kage, yes?"
<> Show choices: Yes
: [Yes] handler:
<> Message: " I see, and you search for the Bermudian castle also?"
<> Message: "you realize, it will be a hard journy?"
<> Message: " Indeed, so, what are you waiting for. Go."
<> Message: "Oh, and remember, a little help is always needed."
end


But, every time I do, it always messes up.


and, whenever I have a chest, you take the item, but then you can take it again! I'd also like to know, I have a sprite has an enemy, Its a big tree monster, but whenever you fight it, it doesn't go away!

That's all.