My first game

I thought that it needed a strong cematic moment at the beginning. Something like laser firing and sercurity guards to stop you and you need to constanly race agains the clock in some situration (ex thinks exploding running though closing gates). You know, a strong intro! The beginning was a little bit to boring and so I thought about some of the stuff which ruined the beginning of the game such as who is he? Whos the girl? Why am I here? What am I doing here? Things that a gamer shouldn't think about while playing a game in any situation. But hey, that was my 10 cents my 2 cent free so better pay up pal!