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Chapter 4
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Posted 2005-11-03, 10:01 AM
I know I haven't updated in a while so heres the start to chapter 4.

And good news: with standard novel 5 X 8 style I have about 70 pages.

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Chapter 4

The dial-tone in my ear sent the same familiar feeling as I dial the number to her house.

“Hello?” A memorable voice answer in the usual phone-etiquette.

“Hey Eadi, what’s up” I say sitting down at my computer.

“Oh hey, Jason. What’s going on?” She says.

“Nothing much. Do you have my coat at your house?” My voice over the phone crackles in her ear.

“Yeah, I borrowed it from you the other day. Why, you need it back?

“No, not really. I just wanted an excuse to come see you.” I type a few things in the story I pulled up on my computer.

“Well,” she slightly laughs, “that’s just like you. Sure you can come see me.”

“Cool, I’ll be there in a few minutes.” I hang up the phone and save my document.


Minutes later I pulled up into Eadi’s driveway. I kill the engine and walk to the front door. The door opens and Eadi walks back to the living room. Last school years events are slowly fading away with time.

Closing the door behind me I follow Eadi into the living room and sit down on the sofa. The TV is blaring hard rock on some music video channel. Eadi walk through the door from the kitchen and sits on the sofa beside me.

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Posted 2005-11-03, 10:15 AM in reply to Wed-G's post "Chapter 4"
I remember this story!

You've really gotta post the full 70 page thingy. Please? For Lenny? You gotta! How can you refuse this face --> ?
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Posted 2005-11-03, 12:28 PM in reply to Lenny's post starting "I remember this story! You've really..."
that sounded great man, put the other pages up so i can understand whats going on
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Posted 2005-11-04, 09:35 PM in reply to gruesomeBODY's post starting "that sounded great man, put the other..."
gruesomeBODY said:
that sounded great man, put the other pages up so i can understand whats going on
It is in the thread "Of All my Friends"

Link >>> http://zelaron.com/forum/showthread.php?t=37074

Newest version link >>> http://zelaron.com/forum/attachment....achmentid=3832
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Posted 2005-11-05, 07:33 AM in reply to Wed-G's post starting "It is in the thread "Of All my Friends"..."
thanks buddy
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Posted 2005-11-05, 11:26 AM in reply to gruesomeBODY's post starting "thanks buddy"
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thanks buddy
no prob. tell me what you think of it.

Only bad thing is I haven't uploaded chapter 3 yet. I have to correct alot of errors.
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Posted 2005-11-05, 01:23 PM in reply to Wed-G's post "Chapter 4"
Not bad. Not bad.

I posted two stories on Zel. No one read them, though. Probably because they were too long.

Post some more.
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Posted 2005-11-06, 03:03 PM in reply to Jessifer's post starting "Not bad. Not bad. :D I posted two..."
Get it published. I'll read it then.
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