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Posted 2003-12-18, 01:55 AM
Look at those soft beautiful eyes
Like a dream to wake up and cry
Lips of soft pink beautiful lies
I hear your voice inside my mind
Your voice scraps throughout my head
Killing me softly til I am wonderfully dead
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Posted 2003-12-18, 02:52 AM in reply to vec's post "beautiful death"
Killing me softly til I am wonderfully dead

I like it, especially this line
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`Insolence` is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-between`Insolence` is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-between
 
 
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Posted 2003-12-18, 05:08 PM in reply to vec's post "beautiful death"
I like this one as well. Very good job. Keep it up.

"Lips of soft pink beautiful lies" is my favorite line.
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