Betrayed

Betrayed


The ones I loved so many years ago,
A dagger through my heart, seemed not to care.
The twisted words and truth told from the crow,
Revealing cries that stripped my essence bare.
Cold eyes full of hatred that seem to stare
At not the person that’s always been near.
Completely shattered the one thing I cared,
Deep trust that was once something I held dear.
I only wish that everything would clear
So this childish grudge would finally end.
I could carry on my life without fear
With all of our differences set to mend.
But know even if this would never cease
Love remains that will refuse to release.


© Jessica W.

It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

Right. Okay. Whatever.

I read that somewhere else before...

I'm certain that you haven't. It's written in Shakespearian Sonnet form, however.

Usually, as long as you have the copyright symbol on it, the copyright status will hold up in court.

people shouldn't steal other people's ideas anyway.

Who's stealing?

Who's stealing?

I'm not saying you stole someone's idea.I am saying that if people didn't steal other people's ideas then copyrights wouldn't be needed.

Yeah, well. Go live in Mars or something.

I believe the correct way to say that would be, go live ON mars.

Blast. You beat me to it.

I beat you to everything except wrighting quality poems or songs :\

It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

I beat you to everything except wrighting quality poems or songs :\

Should I be hurt or honored?

Your choice, and shinto.. i could really care less about corrections, i just dislike eddie for some reason.

I chose to be apathetic.

I don't want to live on Mars.