Game Development Team (Thread 2)

Bit of criticism: The collar on the right for the male seems out of perspective or something. The angle just looks wrong. The female's nose is too far to the left and possibly too big. The big factor could just be created by the left factor. She's just angled far enough to justify her nose being that close to her right eye (her right, not ours). The B's not pronounced enough. It's kind of hazy. And finally... does yours say Bladestar? Because Lenny's says Backstar.

i know back star is the old one I was soppose to change it to bladestar
most of the prob is because im at school and they have fireworks and im not that good at using fireworks