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Posted 2004-10-10, 01:31 AM
Around, all around, the angels gather.
My dread grows as the stroke of death falls against my heart.
It severs me, and darkly my blood drips to the thirsty earth.
In pain i cry out why?!
While death surrounds me.
Now alone, my blood falls upon bleeding eyes.
This is my hell..
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Posted 2004-10-17, 01:51 AM in reply to xWolfPack69's post "Untitled.."
Well, it was a nice start Somewhat grousom however..
I use to be a shoe shinner now I sip Aunt Jamima, I go to sleep in Europe and wake back up in China. CLUB 977 The 80's Channel!!!!! -winamp radio is heaven on earth
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Posted 2004-10-25, 08:58 PM in reply to zagggon's post starting "Well, it was a nice start :) Somewhat..."
That's pretty good. The details are great and create a good image. Is that the entire poem?
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