Sum Poem

The darkness coming quick to your eyes,
the rope coming closer to your neck,
the knife coming to your wrist,
the darkness consumes your soul,
you will live forevermore as a brain dead cadaver,
suicide rots your soul and bannishes you from heavan or hell,
to sit through eternity as a meaningless form of life,
to be despised,
to be forgotto have commited suicide.


This is just somthing i thought up one day while thinking of my dead family members and the people i know who have almost commited suicide and what that means. Some people see it as the easy way out and some as blasphemy. But i see it as eternal destruction of your soul. Plz comment on the poem and tell me how crappy it is.

made error with last 2 lines they are

to be forgotten,
to have commited suicide

Hey it seems like a good poem to me!. It has good meaning to it. The spelling is a bit off but hey, i failed english.

i failed english.

ROFL.

HOW IS THAT HUMANLY POSSIBLE!?!?

You must have downs or something.. anyway one of the requirements to posting on this forum is not failing eight grade English so get out of here.

pH33r don't double post!