poem

Life without sight,
Would be dull alright.
No leaves on the trees,
No beautiful Bees.

Life without sight,
Would torture us in.
Just black and evil,
As if we're full of sin.

Life without sight,
The words make me shudder.
it makes me want to,
go eat peanut butter!

(Didnt know what to put at the end so i just put some corny thing.)

About the as if we're all full of sin part, i knoe you prolly dont care but most humans are full of sins we have impure hearts. Everyone has sinned at least once no matter what you think , and there is always the sinyou didnt confess cuse you were embarresed, but you dont care and im not a poet or a writer or blah blah blah but just thought id bring that to your notice..

for the end after "the words make me shudder" u could have put .. i wounder if he was mudered. b/c the sight was unconterable.so as the light gose thin..i wish i have seen the end of this secene.