Thread: Uhm...some writings from me
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Posted 2004-05-04, 03:41 PM in reply to Jessifer's post starting "Bah. Sov, HOH, Shinto, keep your bias..."
Jessifer said:
you may want to work on the wording of some sentences, and try not to repeat certain words so many times.

Keep it up.
Thank you! Also, I am glad someone told me what i needed to work on. Thanks
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