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Posted 2003-10-04, 11:49 PM in reply to raven5540's post "Review my story (plz)"
Thanks. I think i forgot to put in the main charecters weakness. Well at the start of the game he cant bring himself to kill anouther being. Oh and i forgot to add the update to my main story so re-read it (well at least the parts i will edit) when ive edited it. (my edit includes how/why the charecters join tthe party)
"Dont ask for the truth unless you have the courage to accept it" :me
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