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Posted 2003-10-02, 12:34 AM in reply to raven5540's post "My Story"
i can't really explain Colourfull ill show you an example
non colorfull-she's pretty
colorfull-her beauty lights up the room
its basicly exageration and use of metaphors and it fits well in adventure and epic books. Another thing never plan the book before you write it, its better to just build the story as you write
don't stop war otherwise the end will never come
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