That is a really good start to what you could call the HL epic, I really liked your part about the great, great, great grandfather and how you relate that too god. I never looked at it like that but it sounds terribly true when you said it, I was like damn that is jus how it should be.
You are Brave and have True Faith HL, I jus hope some ignorant fool will not come in here and put a damper on this..
but don't let the haters stop you always keep going