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Ledgend of Liam Part 1
Chapter 1
A boy, eleven year old, blue eyed blond haired kid named Liam, is sitting on the old rusty swing set in his back yard. He sees the sunset in the distant and it reminds him of what has happened in the last two years. It seemed like yesterday for him, the new disease called the Xien started spreading around the world. In the next few months the world turned into a giant war zone, many of the old capital building lay in ruins in cities near where he lived. Though, he and his mother are one of the few thousand left in pockets around the world.“Liam, will you please come in!” says Liam’s mother.“Yeah, I’m coming in soon enough, so don’t worry.” Liam says fiercely to his mother. “Geesh, I’m trying not to worry here alright. I don’t know what’s crawling around here at night.” Liam almost forgot about how the Xien likes the dark. Because of the pollutants in the air the sun always has a purple flash of light when it gets close to the ground. The Xien use it to know when it’s safe to come out and attack the Humans settlements that are left. Suddenly the sun gives off the purple light. Liam hears the Xien coming out of the holes they dig to sleep in during the day. Only one of these Xien knows that Liam and his mother are still living in that house. He sneaks along the wooden fence that surrounds Liam’s backyard. “Payback will be mine,“ he says in his own thoughts.The Xien jumps over the fence and attacks Liam in front of Liam’s mother’s eyes. “Liam, NO!” The boy’s body is bundled on the ground. Liam’s mother runs over to him and carries him into the house. The next couple of days are in pain and agony for Liam. His body is changing but his mind isn’t changing. The mental agony the Xian experience is worse than that of a person who feels alone and without anyone else. Liam’s own mind is like that for the days he is changing. Chapter 2 Days after Liam finally recovers he is walking along the lake in what is left of the park near his house he sees someone laying along the beach. He’s careful of walking to close of what it may be. Suddenly he hears the friendly call of a girl he knew. “Liam! Wow, long time no see, literally.”“Yeah, some things have happened.”“Like?”“Well I got attacked by a Xian.”“Wow!”Liam notices how Sarah looks for the first time. She has a light brown hair. Her eyes are a shade of blue that almost looks like steel. Liam then asks, ”Why don’t you come with me, we have an extra room in my house.” “Thanks.”“No problem”They walk hurriedly to get back before that sunset. Liam sees something that Sarah doesn’t. “Sarah, something doesn’t seem right.”“What is it Liam?”“Well, I think I see a fire where the house should be.”“I see it now too. Liam, I don’t think it’s a good thing to go to the house. I heard from in another city that there’s a place we could stay, a refugee camp. Heck I think there’s even a pickup point in the city near here. I think we should go there.” “Ok lead the way. Though where should we stay at night?”“I was thinking of staying the houses. The Xien can’t seem to be able to go into modern houses very easily.” “Alright then lets go then. You lead the way Sarah.”Every night for the next three days Sarah and Liam walk five miles and find a house to camp in. They would watch the sun set to make sure they would get in on time. “Liam what is that?” says Sarah pointing to a back spot in the cool blue air. “Well whatever it is, it’s flying at us!”The black spot in the sky grows into a green helicopter that circles around them. Liam notices the markings on the helicopter to be from the army. Then the helicopter lands, the people powers down the twin rotors. One of the guys from inside the helicopter walks out the back hatch to meet Sarah and Liam. “Hey you over there, do you guys need a lift to the pick up center near here?” “Sure.” They say together.The next twenty minutes are filled with a mindless buzz from the blades of the craft. “So what happened that you guys are without someone else besides you guys?” The pilot asks in a calm voice. “Well, my mom got killed by a Xien, I think from the size of the flames that encircled the house,” Liam says with a tear on his eye. “Same thing happened to me to,” says Sarah.“You guys must have been wondering for days, you were heading in the opposite direction from the point.” “Wow we never knew that, but thanks for picking us up.” The next thing Liam new was that they were on the ground again and that they were heading towards a larger airplane. “I haven’t seen a plane that big before have you Liam?”“I know, I’ve seen the passenger jets fly by my house but nothing this big.” “Well let’s just get on it and get the heck outta this place.” After a long wait the finally get onto the plane. Liam asks Sarah, “where is this plane going to?” “Personally I don’t know but lets hope it’s far away from this place.” “Agreed.” Chapter 3After ten hours Liam finally feels the plane touching down on the runway. “Sarah, wake up.”“Huh, where are we?”“I think were on the sea or someplace. I can see the ocean from a window but I don’t know that much either. “Well alright then. I guess we will find out soon.”Little to their own knowledge they had landed on and island far out in the Conic Ocean. The island itself was used beforehand as a vacationing spot. If the building weren’t there it would have been a beautiful island with the many types of trees, but because of the development the island was filled with many tall high-rise building near the beach with barely to any forest left. Liam and Sarah leave the plane to find themselves in a throng of people. Liam looks up and sees the light blue-sky overhead. “Well lets try and find a place to sleep at,” Liam says.“Yeah, I think inland there’s more houses without anyone in them. I never liked the beaches anyways. Too much sand.” “Ok then lets get moving then.”After a couple of hours of searching they finally find an unused house. The house looks like it needs some repairs done to the exterior but it was a good condition. “Well Liam I think this should be the place, it’s in a good condition and it’s far way from the beach enough for me.” “So what now then? We could look around to see what’s actually here on this island.” “That’s a good idea then, I think there’s areas where we could go and work at. It would be a good idea to go and look there to see if we could get any money for here.” Sarah and Liam start walking in a direction and after a while they notice no one else is out and around in the area. Sarah notices a sign in the distance. As they walk closer she notices that the sign reads: BEWARE, military installation is located beyond this point. “Liam I don’t think this is the way back towards the beaches, actually I think this way goes toward the middle of the island. “I agree with you there. So lets head the other way, this place is creeping me out.” Sarah and Liam walk in the other direction till they finally see where other people are. Liam sees a large building and asks Sarah, “Is that where we should go?” “I think Liam, people said it was toward this direction but I’m not so sure myself.” Sarah and Liam walk over to the building and go inside. They gaze at the many stores located in the building. Liam goes and looks at the sign that hangs of the ground. “ Sarah, I think there’s a school here. This sign says its located on the 3rd floor, well all of the 3rd floor I guess too.” “I guess we should go up there and see if we could join it soon. Well, I’m saying this because I always like to learn and I think it would help us a lot along the way.” “Alright I guess it could hurt us at all.”They walk up to the 3rd floor and see if they could find who runs the school. After 30 minutes of walking they finally find what looks like to be an office. They knock on the door and the person inside says, “Come in.” They walk in and find who they were looking for.“Hello there I’m Mr. Smith how may I help you?”“Well we’re looking to enroll in the school.”“Ah, just got here I bet? May I have your names please?“Liam Hildegard.”“Sarah Jones.”“Alright then, you’ll begin school tomorrow then.”Liam and Sarah walk out of the office in an utter joy on their faces. So then they decide to look around at the building to see if they could find a job. “Well Liam if we get jobs, it means we wont have that much time for seeing around the islands.” “Yeah, though I was thinking if we switched each day we worked during the weekdays that we would see the island. During the weekends we don’t have to work. “That sounds like a very good plan if I could say for myself.The next two to three hours were used to look around the building for a job. Before the left they decided to meet at a certain time and place to get back home. As they walk home Liam starts talking about the places he seen. “I can’t believe the amount of stores in that building, I think I counted at least one hundred on the 1st floor only. I think I found a job to work at.” “Where?”“Well it’s the main security place of the island, they’re short of people to work for them. When I applied for the job the manager said I was accepted onto the job and to see me next week. “Great Liam. I also got a job too, though it’s not as exciting as yours, but it’s at a clothing store. I have the opposite days as you to work so it is not a worry.” Chapter 4The weeks went on with Liam and Sarah. They got some money to help fix up the house. They were only a little bit there with the amount of money needed. “Liam what should we do, by the time we get the needed money it would be like two years from now.” “Yeah, we should just forget about fixing up this place. It would just take way too long.” Liam had explored over half the island by that time; it was mostly jungle throughout the mountainous part of it; the rest was urban area or the military base. “I think I want to see it a could get into the base. There might be more info on this island that we think.” “I want to come too Liam. I’ll check to see if I could get a day or two off to get inside of the base.” “Alright then. I should have the week off next week anyways.”Unknown to them the military had been searching for them for weeks on end without a result. They want Liam because of the fact that he survived a Xian attack. An hour later Sarah had ran to her work place and asks if she could have some time off. The manager says, “Sure, heck I don’t care much, ill just get someone else to work for the time your gone.” “Thank you sir.”She walks home thinking, “Something’s up, I know it is especially when you manager just gives you a week off.” “Sarah what’s up? You look confused about something.“Yeah Liam I kinda am, I got the week off, but that’s not that its about. Its because the manager said I could. It should have been the boss who said. I’m suspecting that the military has something to do with this.” Just that moment soldiers knock on the door of the house. Liam opens the door expecting there to be someone he knows but to his surprise it’s the soldiers. “Sir, your requested by the General of this island for a lunch. She has to come too.” “Ok? So this is why we were given the time off I guess?”“Yes.”Liam and Sarah walk for at least two hours before they come to the edge of the base. It looks on the outside just a small house. But its look is deceiving; the building is just the main elevator to get to the base. The base itself is one mile underground. “So this is the base?”“No, This is just the lift to get to the base,” says the soldier.“Ah I suspected it to be that, nice hiding for it though.”Liam walks onto the elevator and waits for the soldier to start it. Once started Liam feels the sense of weightlessness enter his stomach. “Liam I don’t feel so good.”“It should end every soon. I think its warming up in this tunnel.”Indeed it was warming up in the tunnel. The lift stops suddenly like it had begun. The General was waiting on the platform for them. “Hello there Liam. I’m General Walker and I was the one who invited you to this here base. I know you may have some questions but let me guide you around the base. Liam and Sarah are in the middle of the whole base; so the General called up a hover cart to transport them around. After a couple of hours they had gone through the whole base except one area; that area is where they’re doing top-secret experiments. The General walks up to the lab door. Liam asks, “What’s behind that door?” “Liam, we called you in here because in reality you’re the only one besides Sarah that can go through the transdimensional rift that we can create in a small craft in space. We may be able to find a cure for the Xian.” The general hands Liam the files over the ship. Liam looks over the plans. “Sir, are you mental! No way am I going in a small craft that barely can withstand going to space than going through something that’s like a black hole and surviving it! Will you allow me to make modifications to the craft? I want to at least survive a crash landing.” “Liam since you’re the one piloting the craft, you can modify any part of it with please.” “Thank you sir, though may I ask one thing, how many men have you lost with this design?” “Ten. Ten men total, one got lost in space. Three didn’t even get into space. Another just stayed one the planet and then four didn’t make it through the rift. The last one crashed on the surface of the planet and died.” “Sir are you sure I would make it back to this dimension?”“I wouldn’t guarantee you would even make it to the point where you could jump.” “Well, I think I can make the probability increase for the rate of working. You might have to rebuild the ship.” “I already planed for that to happen. We haven’t started building it yet. Neither will we build it in till you design it. And by the way you guys we’ve moved you guys into a new barrack built just for you two, so you guys wont have to worry about having to wake up at five o’clock in the morning. “Thank you sir,” says Sarah from behind Liam, “we’ve been trying to get that little house fixed up ever since we’ve moved onto this island.” “Well since the last guy we had about got thrown off the base because of sleeping in we decided to just build the barracks for your guy’s living quarters. Heck it even has its own kitchen and stuff for you guys.” “Now lets get to business. So how are we going to explain this to our bosses at out job?” “Already explained, told them that you guys had some family on the base and would like to stay with them for a couple of months.” “Ah, good explanation, we never told anyone if we had family or not.”Chapter 5Weeks after leaving their home Liam finally says he’s done with the design. He rides a hover cart over to the General’s office to drop off the design. He knocks on the door and the general says, “Come in.” “General sir, I got the design finally done. It should handle reentering atmospheres and going through the rift. It can hold up to 10 people if needed.” “Ah good work there Liam, if you where a soldier you would already have my job by now.” “Sir I want to tell you all that’s needed for it.”“Well son what is needed?”“It needs titanium oxides and a steel-titanium alloy to survive through the rift. The design makes it more of a transport ship instead of a fighter but I have a solution to that problem-“ “Well what is it then?”“Like I was saying, we could have some auto cannons on the outside with a M.A.C. cannon for fighting in outer space against the Xian star fighters.” “Crap son you’d need a power source used in a military sized transport.” “That’s why I downsized the power supply from a transport sized space- ship. The power would still equal the needed amount but its size would be hundreds of time smaller.” “Dang son, now that’s a lot of power in that craft. I’m glad I choose you to design this ship.” “I just want to survive that’s all. Heck if we could we could relocate all the humans we wouldn’t have to deal with the Xian anymore.” “Liam that’s the thing. Xian already developed inter-dimensional travel. Their original world got overpopulated so they had to develop this technology to soothe the overpopulation in that dimension.” “So in turn we have to find a way to kill the head Xian or seal the dimension off and kill the Xian, which would just send them to other dimensions. One thing's for sure I am not choosing the second choice. I hate Xian and I just want to personally kick ever one of their little butts out of this dimension. I would choose being shot in the eye than getting bit with one of those freaks.” “Well what about me then sir, I was bite and I survived.”“You’re special Liam, your not one of them and neither are you a human. Your just one of a kind.” Liam and the General walk over to the foundry to watch as the ship starts getting built. The outline of certain parts form in the molten mass of metal. “Sir, its amazing how this foundry works isn’t it?”“Liam telling the truth, I have no idea how the ship is built. All I know is just that I pay money in and I get a ship out. To me its like one giant vending machine but this one takes more than just spare change.” Liam and the General laugh as they walk away.Chapter 6The next couple of days are used in assembling of the ship’s parts. The heat deflectors are installed for reentry into the different atmospheres. “Liam are you sure this is going to work,” asks Sarah.“Sarah I’m betting my life on this machine, it has different armaments to help protect us during the flight. Heck, there’s an energy shield generator I designed being installed on it. That thing will even protect us in reentry. I even installed the heat shields just for protection in case we loose all power in the system. I installed different system in case of emergencies, like with a power outage; the ships engines will redirect the air automatically downward. The ship floats even if there is a hole in the side. There is also a camo generator onboard so I’m not in much worry.” “Liam in still very worried though, we’re going into a different world, unexplored from our view and we have to try to find out about the indigenous people and other information about the world. Maybe even how we got here as humans.” “Yeah, I think we should just not worry right now.”More weeks pass with the ship being built. Liam and Sarah are put through different training to orient themselves with controls of the ship. Once done with the training they take the ship through different procedures like reentry and acrobatic manovers. One day after flight proactice Liam walks up to the General and says, “You know about the shield system in the ship?” “Liam I seen a design of a generator I haven’t seen and I suspected you made something to help protect you guys.” “Yeah, with the shield there isn’t any need of armor plating, but I wont go without the heat deflectors, the ship would disintegrate if the power went out.” “Very good thinking, that’s how one of the pilots died was because of the heat deflectors failing. He tried to eject in reentry and was burnt into ash by the time he hit the troposphere. Its one thing to tell a family member that their son has died but its another thing to say we don’t have a body for burial.” “That’s a pain a guess, so tell me how’d it end with telling the family member?” “More than just a pain I got slapped in the face like a volleyball and I still think I have the scar from where the ring was.” “Ouch.”“So Liam what ever happened to your parents?”“Sir, my father died in a car wreck when I was four years old. My mother might be out there somewhere looking for me.” Silence followed that last statement. Liam walks away with a feeling of almost guilt of saying something about his mother. The General also has a sad feeling in his heart. He walks into his office for the list of names of who is living on the island. He looks for Liam and finds his last name, and then he looks through people with the same last name and only finds Liam on the list. “Hm,” he thinks, “his mother should of came here unless the Xian are holding her captive somewhere. If they are holder her captive then it’s the first time in the history of the Xian to hold a person captive. Liam might be important to the Xian in more ways than what I think.” What the General is saying is the fact, Liam’s mother is being held captive in the Xian’s own dimension. They are expecting Liam to come charging in to say her, but the true is that Liam has no idea where his mother is or if she is alive or not. Written by Jamer. |
this story proves you are not some 12 year old retarded kid.
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took me a while to write but its the story
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how come you change the skill of your vocabulary and storytelling throughout this entire write-up?
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its just how i write i guess
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why is it in email forward format
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I see what you did thar.
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just how it copied dont ask me
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Quote:
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should be written by like september, that part took me a month and i was rushing
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when you going to publish this?
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i dont know i know ill have some things to fix .. ie some of the ans are and from stupid spell check
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jamer you should start an online blog, a daily blog.
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tried .. never worked out
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I wanna try an online blog, but I don't really have much to say, anyway, lol!
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well edit on the 2 parts ... there might be 3 parts to the story
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when is part 2 going to be finished
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september ... probly by then ill have part one published ... maybe
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You should try a car chase, when you get the chance. They're always interesting.
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there is going to be something like that
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