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vec 2003-12-19 10:39 PM

I love her.
 
Without her
I walk alone
Lonely on the earth
Hands in my own

Without her
I lose all hope
Drowning in my tears
Trying to cope

Without her
Warm days run cold
my heart grows restless
my love grows old

The mistakes I have made
Will live inside me
Everynight I cry for her
With myself I die for her
With my heart I will love her

kaos 2003-12-19 11:43 PM

Whoa, man. That's like romantic shit. Pretty cool. Don't be surprised if I steal it and give it to my g/f :P.

vec 2003-12-20 01:40 AM

O.o give me some <3 though!

Jessifer 2003-12-20 12:50 PM

Here's tha <3!

It's a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. ;) The last stanza is my favorite of the three. Oooh... *sniffle*

sheerx 2003-12-26 01:25 PM

was a great peice of literature (long for poem)
I like your ryhmes mainly because they're not cheap
nice work

Grav 2003-12-26 01:39 PM

The last part reminded me of "I'll be missin you"


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