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Christmas Eve
Sun setting
Moon rising Beautiful stars of shimmering light A birds shadow The light blue painted house The small iron fence An open gate A chilly breeze A small flower garden A girls doll in the grass Silent footsteps The rosewood door A beckoning crow The opened door A Christmas tree Christmas cards Three stockings hanging from the mantle Large window No curtains A lifeless tree The staring crow on a branch A bowl of cookies A childs note A picture of a young girl and her mother and father The long dark hallway A staircase One creaking step after another A bedroom door opens slowly The cautious man Time slows Fear A gun A pleading face The execution A woman screams Second door begins to open A crying girl The puddle of blood A flying crow A low-pitched call The staring crow Hysterical woman crawling Over the body of her husband Confused and weeping child A lasting hug A gun Praying mother Weeping child A whisper Tears Time slows Execution Silence A beckoning crow The staircase The long hallway The front door An open gate Beautiful stars of shimmering light Full moon A scream Breathless The bedroom Christmas Eve A dream A nightmare ------ Yeah.... heh weird =/ I dont usually write anything so Its not good but I was bored.... And its nearly 2am... |
It reminds me of something... but I can't seem to put my finger on it.
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kinda like that one song.. umm ... Cake? i think thats them, the racing for the cup. . "hes driving for whom he still burns... HES GOING THE DISTANCE. hes going for speed. Shes all alone.. all alone in her time of need..." blah blah blah... that song
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i like it for some reason. the beat like someone is walking through the house and witnesses these events one step at a time and pauses in fright or something.
it is good stuff. |
nice job penguin
interesting idea.. I enjoyed it |
Woah. That's hella depressing. o_O Kinda scary too. Imagine that actually happening to ya. Wow...
I like it, though. |
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