cool, cool, also try something with hats - for comedic effect. Everyone likes hat jokes, it's an obvious thing, but nobody ever does it. :confused:

um skurai no ....

But, I mean, like, there's nothing funnier than a Ginger with an Abe-Lincoln hat that has antlers and the antlers have beer cans in them, with the little toob things that go to the mouth, and the person who wears the hat is completely unaware he has that that on.

STFU i write the story not you

sorry for double post but i got it sent into a literary agent ... hopefully from there it will get published

I'm just giving a suggestion. Jeez. I think that hat would fit very well in your story.